Starkiller: Red Giant Breakdown

Intro: Alright, alright, alright! It’s Phasma time—and what a time that was. Nobody is really at their best here, except for Finn, who is absolutely still doing his best, just the same as he was in the first chapter. I’m very proud of him, he’s come a long way in the time he’s been with Black Sun.

As with last week, we’ll break this down into technical details, and story details, and see what we end up with. (At best, I have maybe two topics in mind when I sit down to write these entries, and I always write them immediately after I’ve finished the final pass of edits, so my filter is low, and my exhaustion is high, and I have absolutely been marinating in my own words.)
 

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So, that’s about it for this week! As always, if you have any questions or anything, feel free to comment here or on any other venues that you like. I hope you’re enjoying the piece so far—the last chapter is Mitaka POV, and it comes out next Thursday!